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听《爸爸的梦想》有感, 为原版远方译写3 F8 x0 G& P( ^8 f; ] ?
《爸爸的梦想》-祝父亲节快乐! 8 } i5 `4 @/ M2 E
"Father's Dream" 8 ]$ @% G- a! |1 u7 c9 v
-Happy Father's Day4 [) `% e2 V4 r) m
作词:原版远方 作曲:谭锦明! z3 E6 n$ p4 F: N1 E. R8 I' F
配器:于 洋 男声首唱:于 洋 女声首唱:小卵石9 m6 ] z$ }6 R+ k6 \0 Y: c3 y
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译写手记:
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当人去街宁,打开邮箱,久疏而觉格外亲。一支歌曲,来自远方,不亦乐乎,此君好文,原版笔墨,力透荧屏,未曾晤面,共鸣无限,神交网路,其乐融融。迫不及待,点击便听,链接奉上:
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# b! ~* h+ o2 y8 w一支歌曲如不能一气连听三遍者,不为上乘。而此曲,乐起悠扬,初起清新童稚,转而深沉励志,继而情深哲理。墨沾父子深情游子志怀,写尽海外学子思母相思。春夏秋冬,山高水长,听来复去,已韵入胸膛。5 L, U" _3 o' _. {
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当感动涟涟,润浸眼眶,就不得不让心中的连动,留在了纸上。
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于洋男声版:/ \9 I4 I0 o5 u, N+ M* I
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小卵石女声版:
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* A. j- n# i% Y) g& x5 ~% GComposer: Tan Jinming' l9 Z* s) e* k2 f9 Y X
Orchestration: Yu Yang$ I T( N& b2 P q
Singer Male : Yu Yang
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+ F9 L- B7 ]* K; `) E# ^, e 《爸爸的梦想》-祝父亲节快乐!
% R d2 \) I; v2 ?5 { 小时候 爸爸带我登上山岗
& a$ ]# z1 `: q6 m0 h @望着远处青山 说起儿时的梦想
; G \# j& k1 i为求学 远走他乡 独自来到西湖旁
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" P5 P3 a8 K! @1 K+ G; ~The first mounting onto the hill, me a kid, very little,
1 _! ~. W) V* K. {7 ~3 H3 Mhills, hills, and hills still, but dreams of a child never old. . |: h& w* G, u2 r) ?7 ]! g
a student, by the Lake of West, lonesome moonlight at waterfront, laid.
9 m% |3 `* H; z7 z$ U* C; xa legend told, so many years, and love story buried in a tower, Lei3 I( r. ?: W: Y! P5 g8 V
& E9 a" s- O6 h- s3 ~) `小时候 爸爸带我回到家乡5 l2 w' a7 X; f. m0 a- t* d
重温昔日小屋 说起心中的希望
9 Q A }( v5 t, i* x6 o6 E好男儿 志在四方 北京纽约去远航8 z! f2 A" B g! W2 S: U; F r
上下求索之路并不漫长! U/ u: M5 ~) `! e8 J4 \
Many times, we back home, hands of his, and mine hold, Deep hopes, % s9 A* X! V5 h
spoken and heard from behind a window, a room warm, little and old,
# e( l4 o! s8 `. }* o3 @( uGood boy, go, across the oecean and see the world, t" g% ~0 c0 b! w
Beijing, NewYork, voyage, A map paint, a Globe, & x/ S5 q3 Z8 x9 w
trips are short, but journey is long, steps to the hopes printed on the road. 3 Z4 f/ X" F, |- y# ^# E$ C) j
$ H% M2 [/ u: o9 H D: a6 {' U十年寒窗 有了梦就有了力量
. Q! l- K2 U8 u( t坚定着方向带着期望2 t" g+ l' E- D: ~2 s$ Y
终于走在纽约的大街上
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on my desk into a window, tall and long 8 _2 R0 [# P6 c) s0 }# A5 H# q' c2 \
my dreams milks my will, as rocks in the wall,
8 H7 I" n( u: a( f; Efirm footprints, cries in NewYork streets so aloud, echos knocks empty windows / x' a" {4 z" S5 X
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飞过蓝天,飞过海洋外面的世界靠自己闯( S; j+ x1 n, [; j! i t0 S
记不住阴晴,记不住圆缺却记得爸爸鬓角的白发+ Z' }6 B C$ ]. ~- K
Eagles loves blue in the sky, as the sails-man loves waves in the sea.+ l3 c2 d: Y) h4 Q6 X4 s# w- Q
Sunshine days summer, moonlight nights long in a fall, a world too big to see,
4 \3 i1 I7 {- C; FSummers greet falls, as winters kisses the spring's lips, ( }: j& B# J* _; t. c( H
Moon moves slow in dark clouds, falling leaves, black hair in whites. : z: O9 N. M0 A
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山不再高,路不再长4 j# N$ ~: b( c' ]' u
一串串脚印伸向远方' Z7 g# y: N( V4 ]
忘记了悲欢,忘记了离合
/ }) _! q& I3 v) H却忘不了爸爸儿时的梦想
. ? M3 G% h4 a7 k; P1 cRoads in the country, a novel tells hills never grow,
, c8 ^9 L4 \ Z5 g- V) e0 Cfootprints on trips, mark all maps, a home of hopes down the hills, . O$ n# _. v6 s9 ^' w5 L" V9 W
Happy tears, hugs n a girl, goodbyes n memories make us old, ' b- w" R" ?& H9 |6 J
Daddy's hope, Dreams of sorrows, A story be told, + I0 {7 {7 g6 Q' D, U5 U$ Z. b
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